edits of stories and a new story

i am going to ditch "fluffy little kitten buys cat food" and replace it with stormy kitten or foreign fluffy.

I am going to take the vegetarian gag and the kitten is hungry gag from "buys cat food" and put it into fancy kitten to replace to spotty kittens marylin monroe gag - which is too obscure.

the ditching of "buys cat food" is that it fixes the series at a specific and pretty basic counting age. If you're primarily targetting adults with your books, it doesn't matter if you flit around the age of your reader, but for more general appeal as a kids book I'll focus on emotional, rather than counting style problems...